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Look at the ideas web Frank used to plan his email, and complete it.
The Place:
Corpus Christi
Things I smelled:
baking
Things I tasted:
●
sweet and buttery
Things I heard:
●
the sound of the
on the beach
●
quiet, calming
in the cafeteria
Things I saw:
●
the
rising
●
the sparkling
●
on the
cafeteria walls
Things I touched:
●
the warm
sifting through my hands
●
smooth
BEFORE YOU WRITE
You’re going to write an email to a friend about a new place you have visited.
Think of the five senses. Create an ideas web to plan your email.
The place:
Things I smelled:
Things I touched:
Things I saw:
Things I tasted:
Things I heard:
WRITE
Review the Model and the Writing Tip. Use the ideas from your ideas web
to write an email to a friend describing the place you chose.
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