C
Look at and complete the chart Susan used to plan her writing.
Objective:
To have better lighting installed in the parking garage.
What
am I asking for?
better lighting—brighter lights, or more lights
Where
do we need this?
in the
Why
do we need this?
workers leaving at night do not feel safe
When
do we need this?
before
, when it gets dark earlier
More information
We need more lighting in the elevator area and the garage.
Lighting above the cars should be
.
BEFORE YOU WRITE
A
PAIRS
How can your workplace or school be improved so that it is safer or more
convenient? List five ideas.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
B
You’re going to write a letter of opinion to a supervisor or school administrator.
Choose one of the ideas from your list. Create a chart to plan your letter.
Objective:
What
am I asking for?
Where
do we need this?
Why
do we need this?
When
do we need this?
More information
WRITE
Review the model and the Writing Tip. Use the ideas from your chart to write your letter.
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