LESSON
WRITING
Write a letter of complaint
7
GET READY
Alina is writing a letter of complaint about a product the hospital ordered.
Have you ever written a letter of complaint?
STUDY THE MODEL
A
Read the letter. What problem does Alina have with the product?
May 23, 2014
Mr. Charles Wright
Customer Services Manager
Nutrition for Life, Inc.
2230 Industrial Road
Houston, TX 77015
Re: Account # 715400820
Dear Mr. Wright:
On April 20, 2014, Park View Hospital bought the nutrition analysis
software
DietTrack
on the Nutrition for Life website. We received
the software on April 27. A Nutrition for Life technician helped us
to install the program on April 28.
Unfortunately, the
DietTrack
software does not work as well as
I expected. I am disappointed because the program is missing
important features. For example, the food database is incomplete.
It does not have many of the common food items that our
patients enjoy. I have to enter this information myself each time
I use the program.
Since we are still within the 30-day trial period, we would like to
receive a full refund for this purchase. I am enclosing a copy of the
invoice. Please send instructions on how we can return the software.
Thank you for your help in resolving this matter. I look forward to
your response. You can reach me at the hospital address above or
call me directly at 1-281-555-2430.
Sincerely,
Alina Morales
Clinical Dietitian
Letterhead or
sender’s personal
address
Salutation
Subject line
Date
Closing
Typed name
(and title)
1550 Park Rd., Houston, TX 77004
Alina Morales
126
UNIT 9